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Author: Darius Nease • Title: The Day my Daughter Died Genre(s): Short Story Brief Synopsis: A father's tender and whiskied thoughts about the most important girl in his life...
Author: Sghoul • Title: Leroy Brown Potters Around Genre(s): Fantasy Brief Synopsis: This was written as an excersize to mix two fictional characters.

In our Library of Poetry:

Author: Sandy Lulay • Title: Dragons Never Tell Genre(s): Humor Brief Synopsis: This was inspried by a friend who likes dragons.
Author: M. Edward Crosby • Title: Alone Genre(s): Free Form Brief Synopsis: A feeling anyone can experience when they think they are alone.

In our Library of Non-Fiction:

Author: Malcolm Sterling • Title: Ambush Genre(s): Autobiographical, Mature Themes Brief Synopsis: This happened to me during Marine Combat Training (MCT) in North Carolina. It talks about the importance of training but on another level the deeper lessons taught by training.
Author: Malcolm Sterling • Title: Five Minutes (or less) with the Bard - E7 Genre(s): Podcast Brief Synopsis: A plea for sanity, major site news, a featured author writes about a legendary tree, a new writing prompt and a ponderous quote round out this edition of FMolwtB (some things should not be acronyms).

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J.T. Stafford Image Her eyes^[P] [• READ THIS TITLE •]
Genre(s): Free Form•Language: English
Author: J.T. Stafford

Brief Synopsis
A first try at writing. Be honest.

Author Notes
I tried the blogging thing, it did not work. I feel I have something to share, so I want to try that out here. First time for everything

Reviews

Tara Nicholas : Thanks for sharing. There is definitely something here, it just seemed too remote for complete understanding. The poem lacked details that would help me better understand the content/context of what was happening. The purpose behind this relationship. If it was a mutual relationship, if there was something sinister happening. (This is what I thought at first but at the end she appears to embrace and twist the tables on the he in the story.) I did like the repeated imagery of "As I look into her eyes,..." that was very effective and helped move the lines along but the sections were to sparce for total enjoyment. You may have cut too much from the bones and didn't leave any meat for the reader to chew on. I hope this was the type of feedback you were looking for. You clearly have an interesting style and I would like to read more. Thanks. (29-Dec-08)

Published Titles: 106 • Fiction: 49 • Non-Fiction: 12 • Poetry: 45 • Total Reviews: 111 • Total Readings: 7691 • Avg. QQ: 3.48

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