 Undone [P] [ READ THIS TITLE ] Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense,
Chapter ExcerptLanguage: English Author: Rachy
Brief Synopsis
"Undone" is the story of a struggling novelist/journalist in search of the perfect story. He finds it in a mental hospital patient named Aron.
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Author Notes
Cliffhanger! *Evil laughter*
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Reviews
Mercy Manic : Some of the sentence structure is a bit clunky. It needs some refining. Is this a first draft? Technical notes aside I like this piece, I want to know more about 'the boy' and why he's been institutionalized. Adding a few revealing things about the perspective character at the beginning could be helpful without detracting from the mystery of the haunted artist he so avidly observes. I look forward to reading more. (08-Dec-06)
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