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Rachy ImageUndone[P] [ READ THIS TITLE ]
Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense, Chapter ExcerptLanguage: English
Author: Rachy


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Brief Synopsis
"Undone" is the story of a struggling novelist/journalist in search of the perfect story. He finds it in a mental hospital patient named Aron.
Author Notes
Cliffhanger! *Evil laughter*


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Mercy Manic : Some of the sentence structure is a bit clunky. It needs some refining. Is this a first draft? Technical notes aside I like this piece, I want to know more about 'the boy' and why he's been institutionalized. Adding a few revealing things about the perspective character at the beginning could be helpful without detracting from the mystery of the haunted artist he so avidly observes. I look forward to reading more. (08-Dec-06)
Published Titles: 106 • Fiction: 49 • Non-Fiction: 12 • Poetry: 45 • Total Reviews: 111 • Total Readings: 7689 • Avg. QQ: 3.48
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