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In our Library of Fiction:

Author: Rachy • Title: Undone Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense, Chapter Excerpt Brief Synopsis: "Undone" is the story of a struggling novelist/journalist in search of the perfect story. He finds it in a mental hospital patient named Aron.
Author: M. Edward Crosby • Title: GREEN LANTERN: The Shock Heard Around the World Genre(s): Fan Fiction: Comic Book Brief Synopsis: This is an Elseworlds story I wrote about Green Lantern and the events of 09/11/2001.

In our Library of Poetry:

Author: Uptownfive • Title: Weight Genre(s): Free Form Brief Synopsis: Written after attending the Vote for Change tour with a friend of an ex. we stopped before anything happened and just went to sleep due to a conflict with being the friend of an ex. Anyways, wasn\'t the original intention of the evening, just happened
Author: A.C. Millicent • Title: Gentle Earth Genre(s): Nature Brief Synopsis: A stream of thoughts on a spring day

In our Library of Non-Fiction:

Author: Malcolm Sterling • Title: Ambush Genre(s): Autobiographical, Mature Themes Brief Synopsis: This happened to me during Marine Combat Training (MCT) in North Carolina. It talks about the importance of training but on another level the deeper lessons taught by training.
Author: Jeremiah Tash • Title: Pee Wee and Me Genre(s): Autobiographical, Essay Brief Synopsis: A synthesized look at Jeremiah's life and the film Pee Wee's Big Adventure

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Genre(s): Free Form•Language: English
Author: Uptownfive

Brief Synopsis
Written after attending the Vote for Change tour with a friend of an ex. we stopped before anything happened and just went to sleep due to a conflict with being the friend of an ex. Anyways, wasn't the original intention of the evening, just happened

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Reviews

Mercy Manic : I like this bittersweet poem. The line "as we lay amongst the trees of forbidden fruit" made me squee. I'm not sure about the dropping question marks though. To me it feels like they distract more than they add. (10-Sep-07)

scrapsoflife : Wow... Repetition is one of those fine-line things, it can work or not and in this it really works so well. Very evocative in just a few lines but you really do bring across the pathos of such a situation. (16-Aug-07)

Published Titles: 106 • Fiction: 49 • Non-Fiction: 12 • Poetry: 45 • Total Reviews: 111 • Total Readings: 7691 • Avg. QQ: 3.48

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