 The Foreman [P] [ READ THIS TITLE ] Genre(s): Fan Fiction: Comic BookLanguage: English Author: Sghoul

Appreciation - Fan Fiction: Comic Book
Brief Synopsis
A new hero in the fictional city of Darian
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Author Notes
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Reviews
Malcolm Sterling : I liked the dialogue and speech patterns for the Foreman. It shows his simply nature but kind and generous spirit.
I was a little confused in the last fight scene. What happened to that last guy who was attacking him, just before Jester showed up? Perhaps you could expound upon that some more?
Overall I thought this was a fun peek into a developing character. Any more? (12-Oct-06) Author Reply: "Well, technically in the "universe" he was created in, he has since died." (30-Oct-06)
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